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Top Cold Email & LinkedIn Template Structures

These 30 template structures — 15 for cold email, 15 for LinkedIn — represent the highest-performing outbound patterns in B2B outreach. Each one is built around a specific trigger event, prospect situation, or psychological mechanism, and includes the subject line or opener pattern, body architecture, the mechanism that makes it work, and the mistakes that kill performance. Data benchmarks throughout are drawn from analysis of 2M+ real cold emails and 61,000+ classified replies.
These are structures, not scripts. Copy-paste templates get flagged by spam filters (email providers detect identical content sent at volume) and ignored by prospects who’ve seen the same phrasing from other vendors. The value is the architecture — what to say in which order, which psychological trigger to deploy. Fill in your own numbers, case studies, and prospect research. An email built on the right structure with real data will outperform brilliant copy on a weak structure every time.

Benchmark Data: What “Good” Looks Like

Before evaluating any template, calibrate against real data from 2M+ cold emails analyzed across 161 campaigns.
MetricAverageGood (Top 25%)Excellent (Top 10%)
Cold email reply rate2.09%5-8%10%+
Positive reply rate (% of replies that are interested)14.1%20-30%35%+
Effective interested rate (% of contacts emailed)0.64%2-4%5%+
LinkedIn DM reply rate (1st connections)10-15%15-25%25%+
LinkedIn connection accept rate25-30%30-40%40%+
Multi-channel cumulative reply rate8-12%15-22%25%+
Key data points that shape every template below:
  • Informal tone produces 78% higher positive reply rates than formal (10.36% vs. 5.83%)
  • C-level replies are positive 14.16% of the time — 3.3x higher than managers (4.25%)
  • First message drives 79.4% of all replies at higher quality (8.90% positive vs. 7.55% for follow-ups)
  • Video/demo CTAs produce 30.05% positive reply rates — 3.5x higher than “mind if I send more info?” (8.59%)
  • Companies with 1-10 employees reply with 18.20% positivity vs. 3.43% for enterprises over 10K — a 5.3x gap
  • Structure matters: “Value Prop → Trust → CTA” outperforms all other structures at 9.47% positive rate
  • Ultra-short and medium-length emails tie at roughly 8.8% positive rate; long emails drop to 6.42%

Part 1: 15 Cold Email Templates

New Hire Signal

Trigger: Prospect changed roles in the last 90 days. New leaders (CROs, VPs Sales, Heads of Growth) evaluate vendors, build their stack, and have budget earmarked for change. The first 30 days produce the highest response rates.Why it works: New executives face pressure to demonstrate impact quickly. They’re more open to outside perspectives than incumbents and actively building vendor relationships. Your outreach arrives when they’re looking for options rather than filtering them.Subject: congrats, [company] or new [title] playbook or [company] outboundStructure:
  1. Signal acknowledgment (1 sentence) — reference the exact role and company
  2. Insight from similar transitions (1-2 sentences) — what typically happens when someone in their role joins at their stage
  3. Proof point (1 sentence) — specific result from a similar transition
  4. Question CTA (1 sentence) — ask about their priorities, not your calendar
Example:
[First name], saw you just stepped into the VP Sales role at [company]. When [similar company] brought in a new VP Sales last quarter, the first thing they tackled was the pipeline gap between inbound and outbound capacity — roughly $2.4M in annual pipeline left on the table. We helped them launch outbound that produced 38 qualified meetings in the first 11 weeks. Is closing that gap on your radar for the first 90 days, or are you focused elsewhere?
Word count: 74 words | Response window: First 30 days after role changeCommon mistakes: Waiting past 30 days (urgency drops), generic congratulations without insight, pitching in the congratulations email instead of leading with the transition insight.

Part 2: 15 LinkedIn Templates

LinkedIn operates under different rules than email: shorter messages (under 400 characters for DMs), more conversational tone, softer CTAs, and a warm-up sequence (profile view → like → connect → DM) that lifts reply rates by 27%+. Connection requests with personalized notes get 72% higher acceptance rates (9.36% vs. 5.44%).
LinkedIn vs. Email performance data: LinkedIn DMs to 1st-degree connections average 16.9% reply rate — significantly higher than cold email’s 2.09% average. However, LinkedIn requires the connection accept step first (25-40% acceptance rate), which reduces the effective reach per contact. Multi-channel sequences combining both channels outperform single-channel by up to 287%.

New Role Connection + DM

Trigger: Same as New Hire Signal email — prospect changed roles recently.Connection Request (under 300 characters):
Hey [first name] — saw you just moved to [company] as [title]. Always good to connect with [title]s navigating the [specific challenge, e.g., “pipeline ramp”]. Congrats on the move.
Follow-Up DM (under 400 characters):
Quick question — when [similar company] brought in a new [title], the first thing they tackled was [specific challenge]. Took them from [before metric] to [after metric] in [timeframe]. Is that on your radar, or are the first 90 days focused on something else entirely?
Why it works: The connection request is pure relevance — no pitch, no company name. The DM leads with insight about similar transitions, making it feel like peer advice rather than a sales message.

Template Sequencing: Building Multi-Channel Campaigns

Individual templates produce results. Multi-channel sequences compound them. Running both email and LinkedIn in a coordinated cadence lifts total reply rates by up to 287%. Recommended multi-channel sequence:
DayActionTemplate to UseChannel
1Send Email 1Strongest signal template (New Hire, Post-Funding, or best-fit)Email
2View prospect’s LinkedIn profileLinkedIn
3Send connection requestMatching LinkedIn templateLinkedIn
4-5Send Email 2Proof template (Vertical Portfolio, Before-After-Bridge, Extreme Proof)Email
5+Send DM after connection acceptedFollow-up DM from matching LinkedIn templateLinkedIn
8-10Send Email 3Reframe template (Contrarian, 97% Gap, Competitor Switch)Email
10-11Send LinkedIn follow-up DMNew angle — benchmark offer, free value drop, or results curiosityLinkedIn
13-15Send Email 4 (breakup)Detachment closeEmail
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Email 1: Lead with Strongest Signal (Day 1)

Priority: Signal templates (New Hire, Post-Funding, Tech Stack, Competitive Shift) beat situation templates (SDR Replacement, Competitor Switch) beat proof templates (Vertical Portfolio, Extreme Proof). If no signal exists, match to the prospect’s known situation.
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Email 2: Add Proof from a Different Angle (Day 4-5)

Never repeat the same psychological mechanism. If Email 1 used relevance (Signal), Email 2 should use proof (Social Proof, Before-After-Bridge). If Email 1 used loss framing (SDR Math), Email 2 should use competitive pressure (Vertical Portfolio).
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Email 3: Reframe the Problem (Day 8-10)

Change the angle entirely. Contrarian Data, 97% Gap, or Agency Recovery all work as reframes. Each email must stand alone — never reference previous emails. For full framework rotation guidance, see our copywriting frameworks playbook.
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Email 4: Detach and Close (Day 13-15)

Breakup email. Zero pressure. “If [outcome] is worth exploring later, just reply ‘later’ and I’ll reach out in Q[X]. Either way — no hard feelings.” Breakup emails produce the highest per-email reply rate in most sequences. See our cold email sequence playbook for the full structure.

Copy Rules for Both Channels

Non-Negotiable Rules (Email)
  • Plain text only — no HTML, images, tracking pixels, or attachments
  • No links in Email 1 — reduces deliverability 15-25%
  • No calendar links in first message — reduces reply rates 30-40%
  • Email 1 under 90 words (under 60 is better) — emails under 75 words get 1.5-2x reply rates
  • Subject lines under 6 words, lowercase preferred — 1-3 words perform best
  • One CTA per email, always a question — demands get deleted, questions start dialogue
  • No spam triggers: “free,” “guarantee,” “act now,” “limited time”
  • Peer-to-peer tone — informal emails produce 78% higher positive reply rates than formal
Non-Negotiable Rules (LinkedIn)
  • Connection request under 300 characters — no pitch, no company name
  • DMs under 400 characters — 3-4 sentences maximum
  • Never pitch in the connection request — the goal is acceptance, not a meeting
  • Never start with firstname as the first word
  • No calendar links in DMs — suggest a next step conversationally
  • Warm up before connecting: view profile, like 1-2 posts 1-2 days before sending the request (boosts acceptance 27%+)
  • Each message must stand alone — never reference previous messages
Testing Rules (Both Channels)
  • A/B test 2-3 templates simultaneously per segment
  • Minimum 100 sends per variant before drawing conclusions
  • Measure positive reply rate, not open rate or raw reply rate
  • Rotate templates every 3-4 weeks
  • If below 2% reply rate across 200+ sends: fix targeting before rewriting copy
The ideal cold email according to 2M+ emails analyzed: Target C-level at companies with 1-10 employees. Use informal tone (10.36% positive rate). Keep ultra-short or medium length (both around 8.8% positive rate). Structure as Value Prop → Trust → CTA (9.47% positive rate). Use a video or demo CTA (30.05% positive rate). Send on Monday for volume or Thursday for quality. Focus effort on the first message — it drives 79.4% of all replies.

Frequently Asked Questions

No. These are structural blueprints. Copy-paste templates get flagged by spam filters (email providers detect identical content at volume) and ignored by prospects who’ve seen the same phrasing. Fill in your own numbers, case studies, and prospect research. The architecture is what produces results — the specific words should be yours.
Priority order: (1) New Hire Signal — if role changed in last 30 days; (2) Post-Funding — if announced in last 6 weeks; (3) Competitive Shift — if market event in last 2 weeks; (4) Tech Stack Signal — if recent adoption; (5) Competitor Switch — if bad vendor experience known; (6) SDR Replacement — if they have SDRs; (7) Vertical Portfolio — if strong industry proof but no specific signal. Signal templates beat situation templates by 2-3x.
Stagger touches across channels, never same-day. The recommended cadence: Email Day 1, LinkedIn profile view Day 2, connection request Day 3, Email 2 Day 4-5, LinkedIn DM Day 5+, Email 3 Day 8-10, LinkedIn follow-up Day 10-11, breakup Email Day 13-15. This spacing ensures the prospect sees your name across channels without feeling bombarded. Multi-channel sequences outperform single-channel by up to 287%.
Cold email: 2.09% average, 5-8% good, 10%+ excellent. LinkedIn DMs to 1st connections: 16.9% average. Re-engagement: 7-14% typical. Multi-channel combined: 15-25% for well-targeted campaigns. Key context: only 14.1% of cold email replies express genuine interest — nearly half (45.1%) are auto-replies. Optimize for positive reply rate, not raw reply rate.
Test 2-3 connection request variations and 2-3 DM follow-up variations simultaneously. Since LinkedIn limits daily connection requests (typically 100-200/week), you’ll need 2-3 weeks to gather enough data per variant. Measure connection acceptance rate and DM reply rate separately — a great DM can’t save a bad connection request, and a great acceptance rate means nothing if DMs don’t generate replies.
Based on the data: target C-level at smaller companies. C-level replies are positive 14.16% of the time (3.3x higher than managers), and contacts at 1-10 person companies have 18.20% positive reply rates (5.3x higher than 10K+ enterprises). The combination — CEO of a 5-person company — is the highest-converting cold outreach target in B2B. Most teams over-index on company size and under-index on prospect seniority.
Personalization beyond first name and company name (i.e., referencing a specific signal, post, hire, or data point about their business) boosts reply rates 2-3x. Merge-tag personalization (firstname, company) is table stakes — everyone does it and prospects recognize it instantly. True personalization means each email contains at least one observation that proves you researched this specific person. If you can’t personalize meaningfully, use a template built around a strong question (Crispy Question) rather than a weak merge tag.

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